I am from a place where people rarely make it, a place where I can dream and have aspirations. I am from a place where giving up is not an option, where getting up is the only option. A place where I can showcase my skills, prove others wrong, show that I am truly "The One." I am from a place where nothing matters except me. A place where the word "fear" doesn't exist, where pain is admired, where I am as free as a stallion. I am from a place of diamonds and metal, a man's greatest appreciation. I'm from a place in which men have created. A place where the numbers 3 and 9 are symbolized as the games basic structure. I'm from a place where 42 is more than a number on my back, more than an identity, more than any lifestyle. I'm from a place where clothing is made to rip and get dirty. A place where your family isn't just your blood. I am from America's past-time. I'm from a mound, 3 bases, and just 1 plate.
Loved your poem. Believe in yourself you'll make it bro!!!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you said that giving up is not an option and getting up is the only option.
ReplyDeleteI loved it and I believe that you really want to make it in this world. You can do anything you put your mind to.
ReplyDeleteI liked your poem it was really deep I like your simile when you said your as free as a stallion.
ReplyDeleteReally like how you use 42 and sAy how it's more then just a number
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ReplyDeleteI like how you clearly are talking about baseball andyet you never mention the words "baseball."
I like how you described one specific place and all the things you think that place consists of and what they mean to you.
ReplyDeleteNice choices in metaphors. Never give up and you WILL make it.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is very meaningful.
ReplyDeleteIt was a good poem and you used your poetic devices in a very good way
ReplyDeleteI really like how you incorporated your love for baseball into your poem. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteI like how you made your poem like a baseball game. It was cool.👍
ReplyDeleteLike how you use baseball in your poem.
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